The following essay deliberately incorporates each of the e-rater Grammar errors to serve as an example. (See the list of e-rater Grammar errors).

The Importance of Learning Multiple Languages

In today's globalized world, being able speak multiple languages has never been more important. Language, not only helps us communicate, but also is an instrument for cultural understanding and business operations.

For example, many families in today's globalized society comprised of mixed heritage. (101) Therefore. family members often speak more than one language at home. (102) Language is plays a critical role in familial harmony. (103)

Speaking multiple languages fluently may significantly increase your job prospects. (104) This help you stand out among other candidates in a competitive job market. (105)

Learning languages also expose you to new cultures, including their food, art, and history. (106) Travelling become more enriching, and interactions are more meaningful when you can speak in the native language of the place your are visiting. (107)

In a nutshell, learning multiple languages not only beneficial for personal reasons but also for professional and social scenarios. (108) As Nelson Mandela once said, "If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his language, that goes to his heart." (109)

Feedback Mapping

• 101 - FRAGMENT: The sentence "For example, many families in today's globalized society comprised of mixed heritage." is a fragment.
• 102 - RUN ON: The sentence "Therefore. family members often speak more than one language at home." is a run-on sentence.
• 103 - GARBLED: The sentence "Language is plays a critical role in familial harmony." is garbled.
• 104 - SUBJECT/VERB AGREEMENT: In "Speaking multiple languages fluently may significantly increase your job prospects," the subject and verb may not agree.
• 05 - VERBS: In "This help you stand out among other candidates in a competitive job market," the verb may be incorrect.
• 106 - PRONOUN: In "Learning languages also expose you to new cultures," the pronoun "you" may be incorrect.
• 107 - POSSESSIVE: In "Travelling become more enriching, and interactions are more meaningful when you can speak in the native language of the place your are visiting," the word "your" may need to show possession correctly, e.g., "you're."
• 108 - WRONG OR MISSING WORD: In "In a nutshell, learning multiple languages not only beneficial for personal reasons but also for professional and social scenarios," there may be a wrong or missing word.
• 109 - PROOFREAD THIS!: In "As Nelson Mandela once said, 'If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his language, that goes to his heart,'" there might be an error or misspelled word making the meaning unclear.